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    Ghost of you

    Post by Trevlac on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:56 am

    AN: ok so dis is a stry aboot the wrold of foorius angles. don h8 on me cuz if you do ur a f*ckin poser!! and my lover ordin (if you didn now that then ur oviously not a fan!!) will shot you with bulets.

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    Chapter 1

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    Ok my name's Naomi and im have perfect blond hair (long duh like my brother trevlac!!) and icy blue eyes cuz i look like my borther only im a girl (not like dat u perv!). one day while I was a vampire I walked down the street in my pink panties and my fishnet top and of course all tha boys were starin at me cuse their pervs but i was goin to see Odrin.

    I arrive at his house sexily with my virgnitey still intact and I know his is too!! and she hanswered the dorr in a towel. he was dropping wet and his hair was soaked. He looked at me and in my fishnest and pink panties and his jaw dropped at seein g someones sister who was his friend so hot standing befor him. Before he could let me in i killed him on the lips (it's natural it's not icky >.<) and we backed in making out slowly and almost forgot to shut the door. his room was decorated with guns and red things and his bed was a red one with rifles as bedposts. And he slipped off my fishnet top and my panties while we kiss and well...we did thing that I can't say!!! cause i'm not taht kind of girl that i tell.

    just then! my brothe walked in really angry.

    "why r u sleeping with her." he shouted hard. it was my brother (Trevlac) and he was mad

    "She came to me it wasn't my fault comrade!" Ordin said sadly. cuz even tho he didn't start it he really liked it and he fell in love with me.

    Trevlac pointed his falcon at Ordin and said "let's dual! she's only 15 u perv pedo!" and I said back to him

    "Trev ur a pedo 2 y are u hating on Ordin he loves me!" i said

    and Ordin kissed me with the falcon in his face and said with teers in his eyes "I LOVE NIOMI" he whispered.

    and Trevlac lowered his blade and smiles. "At leist you chose well!"

    END OF CHAPTER ONE

    OK tel me how u lik it i'll only write anoter if I get 3 good revowes!


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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Kaen on Sun Jan 11, 2009 4:16 pm

    i laughed, it was well written, really likedf the part where ordin said he loved her even when trevlac we mad, write more please
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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Toothpick on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:36 pm

    I have to kill you now, you know.
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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Trevlac on Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:38 pm

    Toothpick wrote:I have to kill you now, you know.

    omg!!1 I'm glad u liked it ^_^


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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Ordin on Sun Jan 11, 2009 10:12 pm

    I've never felt an emotion like that before. It was like an angry orgasm in my brain. The whole time I was laughing like a retard but on the inside I was fucking raging, throwing shit against the walls and screaming until my throat was bloody.

    I especially like the part where Ordin called Trevlac "comrade" and when Trevlac "shouted hard".

    I'm so fucking angry that you would degrade my character like that, but please write more.


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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Dimitrius on Mon Jan 12, 2009 12:35 am

    Moar. Now.
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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Daius on Mon Jan 12, 2009 8:36 pm

    ...I didn't know you had a sister who slept with Ordin, Or who wanted to "Kill him on the lips."
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    Re: Ghost of you

    Post by Toothpick on Mon Jan 12, 2009 10:52 pm

    Are you Tara Gliebse's long lost brother?

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