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    5 Short Poems

    Post by Vicodin on Sat Jan 31, 2009 1:36 pm

    So this year I got accepted into my University's one and only creative writing course! Yay! So anyway, here are some of the poems that my professor really loved.


    A Nazi Lovesong

    A blitzkrieg of sound-
    schutzstaffel sonata,
    your panzer invading my senses.
    What is the source of your power,
    man? And
    how does your
    tenor
    control all that I am?
    I am lost in your reich of
    pitch, harmony.
    Chord me into submission,
    baby.


    Toki

    Tomcat; unfixed, aggressive-
    begs for dinner on my lap.
    Part dog, part man, part wild thing,
    not knowing the conventions
    laid out for his behaviour.
    Unabashed beauty: he has
    one blue eye, one brown, soft fur.
    Always ready for play, pounce,
    on unsuspecting victim.


    Butches Delight

    Woman; I am stone for you, your face so pretty.
    You’re a butches delight, my Sapphic score.
    When I undress your body in a flurry,
    your breasts, bounty, from your shirt they spill.
    And I sink my teeth into your silken ankle.


    Hannah, (daddy isn’t coming home)

    Long green moss, she grabs softly,
    slowly, like the smooth dark curls.
    With ache, deserted infant feels the cold
    of small angel snow rubbing her bloody.
    She edges to the fireplace, always empty.


    Scherzo di Leonardo

    You can’t forget to put the
    eyebrows on.
    I stayed up all night
    shaping them,
    painstakingly selecting
    unruly hairs
    and banishing them
    with gold tipped tweezers.
    My crowning glory.
    My fine
    Italian brows,
    spun like
    heaven filament.
    Paint them last.
    Make them count.
    Let my one vanity
    be remembered
    forever.
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    Re: 5 Short Poems

    Post by Trevlac on Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:23 pm

    These sound like they should be performed by Dethklok


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    Re: 5 Short Poems

    Post by Vicodin on Sat Jan 31, 2009 4:30 pm

    oh, lol, our cat is named Toki. After the second fastest guitar player in the world.

    I admit, a few are pretty dark material.
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    Re: 5 Short Poems

    Post by Trevlac on Sat Jan 31, 2009 7:05 pm

    The first being Herman Li or Yngwie Malmsteen?


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    Re: 5 Short Poems

    Post by Ordin on Sun Feb 01, 2009 12:01 am

    I nod favorably.


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    Re: 5 Short Poems

    Post by Toothpick on Sun Feb 01, 2009 12:16 am

    Lyrical, fresh, intelligent.

    A few rough spots, but damn solid stuff.
    From one writer to another, FUCK YEAH!
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    Re: 5 Short Poems

    Post by Vicodin on Sun Feb 01, 2009 1:20 am

    Trevlac wrote:The first being Herman Li or Yngwie Malmsteen?

    The first being Skwisgaar Skwigelf, taller than a tree. The second being Toki Wartooth, not a bumblebee. (Kitten's namesake...) We need a pet thread.

    Ordy and Toothy, thanks!

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