Hello

My real name is Calley.
I am inspired by everyday occurrences and objects. They play to my creative will when writing poetry, short stories, etc.
I love to hear critiques so please don't hesitate.

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY

cool, a new person!

threevening new person!

Callisto wrote:I love to hear critiques so please don't hesitate.

Ordin flies through the doors, shattering them to splinters, a ridiculous grin smearing his pock marked face. His hat does a floppy somersault in after him and lands upon his head, without stopping in his tracks, he continues to sprint for a set of doors across the room.


You are actually very pretentious, supposedly finding 'inspiration' in every day bullshit, though you seem to not have coagulated the 'inspiration' for even a moderately interesting welcome post, leaving the debt of first impressions to your sand paper-like words and a drawling internet voice. Personally, I find this perfectly unacceptable and I will look for reasons in the future to criticize you in the future because of it.

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this is Ordin. this is what he does.

get used to it

hey, cain. i said "I will look for reasons in the future to criticize you in the future", if time traveling criticism isn't awesome i don't know what is.

Oh god, not again.

I need vodka and a Deagle brand Deagle....

>if time traveling criticism isn't awesome i don't know what is
It was only eleven 'o clock...

My criticism is so subtle, even I don't notice it!

Ordin wrote:

Callisto wrote:I love to hear critiques so please don't hesitate.

Ordin flies through the doors, shattering them to splinters, a ridiculous grin smearing his pock marked face. His hat does a floppy somersault in after him and lands upon his head, without stopping in his tracks, he continues to sprint for a set of doors across the room.


You are actually very pretentious, supposedly finding 'inspiration' in every day bullshit, though you seem to not have coagulated the 'inspiration' for even a moderately interesting welcome post, leaving the debt of first impressions to your sand paper-like words and a drawling internet voice. Personally, I find this perfectly unacceptable and I will look for reasons in the future to criticize you in the future because of it.

mr ordin sir, that was not conducive to a positive outlook

oh hello

i never said you weren't awesome, Ordin.

cause we all know you are.

well... those of us that are left.

Cain Le Creuset wrote:well... those of us that are left.

aka the ones i haven't scared off? just thinning out the herd. it's my job.

Walking up to the recently thrown open doors, stepping in to the dim light, Sparta throws down his half smoked full flavored cigarette and extinguishes it thoroughly with the sole of his boot. As the fading smoke rises up his pant leg he walks up next to Ordin.

Sparta- "Ordin sure knows how to be an asshole, but he is damn handy in a tight spot.

Sparta says as he passes Ordin and pats him on the shoulder heading toward a dusty semi tall stool. Sparta takes a seat lighting another cigarette.